Peregrin wrote:I think it is too long.
For The World Is Hollow And I Have Touched The Sky was a perfectly decent Star Trek episode.
EDIT: Speaking of the elves, I like it that you've made them something more than tall skinny hippies with pointy ears but maybe you haven't done enough. I'm not sure, because the mention of their eyes looking like cats' does emphasize them not quite being human.
Well defining elven culture, and elven way of life is difficult to say the least. The elves don't just have one culture, so it's hard to say 'elves are at one with nature' or 'elves prefer cities and advanced society', because they're even more individualistic than we are. It's not worth putting down much more unless I go through every type of elven ethnicity and culture; and there are quite a few. I may just stick to
Elves in the Pyrdhan Isles and perhaps the common things that differ about elven psychology. About 80% of elves are, for instance, functionally bisexual. And that elves have low fertility; not many elves are infertile, but elven conception rates are rather ridiculously low.
Perhaps it should be an enigma to E&Dverse science that half-elves aren't sterile?
Well, elves aren't quite human, certainly, but they're related to humans - or humans are related to elves. Of course, medical science is limited to 'four humours' and 'leeches for headaches' at the minute, so people generally accept it without much confusion because it's always been like that.
EDIT: I've slightly expanded on the elves, going into common psychological features.