[Story] SHADOW TEMPEST BLACK

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Re: [Story] SHADOW TEMPEST BLACK

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Heretic wrote:By the powers invested in me as the third most commenting member of Omniverse One, I hereby declare myself Minister of Culture and decree that SHADOW TEMPEST BLACK have its grammar and spelling fixed and become a Must-Read for all cadets in the fictional and prestigious Omniverse One Academy of Literature and Dickstabbing!
Yeah, my proof-reading really really leaves something to be desired.

Also, now I read it there seems to be a similarity, or more appropriately a rip-off on my part, between this masterpiece and my feeble America in Space, Yeah!. I now beg for forgiveness concerning communists and people sharing "your mom", power armor, and any other thing that makes it look like I stole from here.
It's interesting - neither of us have read the other's story in question, so whatever similarities evolved in a vacuum.
SHADOW TEMPEST BLACK || STB2: MIDNIGHT PARADOX
The day our skys fe||, the heavens split to create new skies.
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