Yeah, my proof-reading really really leaves something to be desired.Heretic wrote:By the powers invested in me as the third most commenting member of Omniverse One, I hereby declare myself Minister of Culture and decree that SHADOW TEMPEST BLACK have its grammar and spelling fixed and become a Must-Read for all cadets in the fictional and prestigious Omniverse One Academy of Literature and Dickstabbing!
It's interesting - neither of us have read the other's story in question, so whatever similarities evolved in a vacuum.Also, now I read it there seems to be a similarity, or more appropriately a rip-off on my part, between this masterpiece and my feeble America in Space, Yeah!. I now beg for forgiveness concerning communists and people sharing "your mom", power armor, and any other thing that makes it look like I stole from here.